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Write something about travelling



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I haven't  a lot of travel,

When I was young, I went to japan with my family and had a lot of fun experienced.

If I go to travel, I want to go amusement park, beach, a good place to go to travel...


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Correction:     Student's sentence        Corrected sentence        Grammar explanation       Better sentence   


I haven't  a lot of travel,

I haven't done a lot of travel,

Add a verb in the sentence. 



When I was young, I went to japan with my family and had a lot of fun experienced.

This sentence is correct. 


If I go to travel, I want to go amusement park, beach, a good place to go to travel...
If I will travel, I want to go to an amusement park, to a beach, and to a good place to go traveling. 
Change "go to" to "will". Add the article "an" before the word amusement.   Add "to a" before beach. Add "and" and "to" before good. Change "to travel" to "traveling". Lastly, erase the two dots (..) in the end of the sentence. 


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